Most readers meet a feature twice: once at the headline, once at the line beneath it. That second line is the standfirst, and it carries more weight than its size suggests. In a sentence or two it has to tell the reader what they're looking at, why it matters now, and what they'll get if they stay.
It is also where writers most often go wrong. Not by writing something bad, but by writing the wrong thing: the summary, the warm-up, the headline said again in slightly more words.
Here is how to write one that pulls its weight.
What a standfirst is actually for
A standfirst sits between the headline and the body copy, usually in a slightly larger or lighter typeface. Some newsrooms call it a deck, a sell or a secondary headline. Whatever the label, its function is the same: it converts a passing glance into a decision to read on.
The headline labels. The standfirst promises. A headline can be three words and a bit of attitude; the standfirst has room to say what kind of story this is and what the reader stands to gain from it. It is also the place to establish tone before the first paragraph sets the scene.
Remember that it often travels alone. On a section front, in a newsletter, on a social card or in a search result, the standfirst may appear without the article — sometimes without the headline. So it has to make sense from a cold start, with no context around it. Read yours as though you had never heard of the subject.
Four jobs to tick off
Before drafting, be clear about what the line has to achieve. A workable standfirst does four things at once.
- Names the subject — not vaguely, as in "a new approach to care", but specifically enough that a reader knows whether this concerns them.
- Supplies the friction — the surprise, the contradiction, the thing that is not as it should be. News sense in miniature.
- Signals the voice — a straight report, a profile with attitude, a piece with a point of view. Readers should sense the register within the first ten words.
- Makes a promise the piece keeps — and this is the one writers break most often. If the standfirst asks a question, the feature answers it. If it claims a revelation, there had better be one.
Most first attempts manage the first job and stop. That is a caption, not a standfirst.
Where the hook is hiding
You do not invent a hook; you find it. It is usually already sitting in your notebook or your transcript, in the moment that made you stop typing. A subject who laughed at the wrong point. A detail that contradicts the official line. A figure that reframes the whole story. The line you repeated to a friend on the way home.
So begin at the end. Write the piece first, then go back through your material with the finished article in mind. You will read your own opening paragraphs differently: the standfirst is often buried in the third sentence, wearing a coat.
If you are stuck, ask what you would say to a colleague to persuade them to read the piece tonight rather than tomorrow. That sentence, tidied, is usually your standfirst.
Drafting the line
Lead with friction, not context
Weak standfirsts begin with background: what the report says, when the meeting happened, who commissioned the review. Readers arrive mid-life and mid-conversation; they want the live wire first. Not "A council review has examined the future of rural bus services", but something closer to "The village's last bus is on a list of routes to be cut, and the people who depend on it have nowhere else to turn." Same facts, different order.
Use nouns you can picture
Abstractions drain a standfirst dry: challenges, issues, landscape, space, conversation, journey. Concrete nouns do the work instead — buses, night shifts, rent, the walk to the nearest shop. If a sentence would still be true with the specifics removed, it is not doing enough.
Match the register of the piece
A chirpy standfirst on a sober subject reads as flippancy. A solemn one on a light interview promises a lecture. Read your opening three paragraphs, work out the temperature, and set the standfirst to match. This matters more than elegance.
Keep it to one idea
If you need a colon, a semicolon and an aside, you are writing two standfirsts. Choose the stronger one. The other belongs in the first paragraph, where it will be more welcome anyway. Most standfirsts run to somewhere between fifteen and thirty-five words — long enough to say something, short enough to read in one breath.
Where honesty comes in
The temptation is always to oversell: to promise the interview everyone is talking about, the story that changes everything. Resist it. Overwritten standfirsts buy a click and lose a reader. They also put you in an awkward position with the person you interviewed, who will see the line above their own words and may ring the desk about it. They will be within their rights.
Three habits keep you honest. Quote only what was said, in context, without trimming away the qualification that changes the meaning. Ask only questions the piece answers. And never imply that a subject said or believes something you could not point to in your notes if challenged.
If the standfirst promises more than the copy delivers, the fix is not a gentler standfirst. It is a better piece — or a shorter one.
Standfirsts for interviews
Interviews need a different rhythm, because you are selling a person rather than an argument. The common failure is the contents-page line: "The actor talks about a career spanning three decades, his latest role and the state of British theatre." That tells the reader nothing they could not have guessed, and wastes the best real estate you have.
Strong interview standfirsts tend to do one of three things: use the sharpest quote from the piece, expose the gap between the public image and the person in the room, or name what is at stake for them. A comparison helps:
Before: The actor talks about his career, his influences and what comes next.
After: For thirty years he read the lines other people wrote. Now he is choosing them himself, and not everyone in the industry is pleased.
The second version only works if your reporting supports it. If the interview did not produce that tension, do not manufacture it — find the one it did produce.
The two-minute edit
Whatever you draft, run it through the same checks before you file.
- Read it aloud. If you run out of breath, it is too long.
- Cut the first three words. They are usually a throat-clearing phrase such as "It is not often that".
- Remove anything that repeats the headline rather than advancing it.
- Swap adjectives for facts wherever a fact is available.
- Cover the headline and read the standfirst on its own. Does it still make sense?
- Check every claim in it against the copy, line by line.
Write two, choose one
Standfirsts are rarely right first time, and they are almost never improved by rewriting the same sentence over and over. Write two instead: one that plays it safe and states the story plainly, one that leans into the sharpest detail you have. Put them side by side and ask which one the piece can actually honour.
Then give it ten minutes and read it once more with fresh eyes. The standfirst is often the last thing a writer finishes and the first thing a reader meets, which is exactly why it deserves those extra minutes. Get it right and you have earned the next two thousand words.
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